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Hinata PinUp - FINISHED

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yeah... i'm done.

added highlights and color. made the metal look more like ice-y.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

It's a very beautiful picture, and I love it a lot, but this IS a critique so I'll be fair and say what I think. I somehow feel I don't really have a right to though, since my own work isn't so good and I have the same troubles this piece reflects...and more! I hope this is accurate and helpful.

The lighting is off, and her one hand looks a little wonky. Her face seems flat, but that might just be your style. Her head in proportion to the rest of her body seems a tad too small. The colors mesh wonderfully and the snow looks really nice.

I saw the newer version of this picture too, very well done. It's a really nice piece, and the redone version shows how much you've grown as an artist. Job well done! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />