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Return to the Snow

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This is a redo of -------> [link]
Every once in a while, i like to do an old piece over to see how i've improved and realize that i HAVE made progress and that i'm getting better with time and practice.

I'll put a poster version up for sale if i get enough requests. :D

and yes... she's probably pretty cold :p
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

AH! Shading seems to be perfect in this version and the background is really quite nice. The hand is still off though. Her hair is VERY nice, with the highlights setting it off just right and her head seems to be in the correct proportion to her body. Her blush seems a bit too fake...but this IS an anime type look, so that can slide. Her eyes are well shaped and striking. The colors work well.

The curve of stairs don't quite seem to match the way the rail and the wall are placed and they look a little blockish. I'd say that she looks amazing, but the background needs a little work.

Hope this was helpful!