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Return to the Snow by *jadeedge:iconjadeedge:

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This is a redo of -------> [link]
Every once in a while, i like to do an old piece over to see how i've improved and realize that i HAVE made progress and that i'm getting better with time and practice.

I'll put a poster version up for sale if i get enough requests. :D

and yes... she's probably pretty cold :p

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*DarkMidnightRose Jul 26, 2009, 4:37:06 PM
This piece is amazing, first of all. The lines are cleanly and neatly drawn, and the shading and lighting are both done beautifully. I really don't have any suggestions for this piece of work, other than the pose seems kind of stiff, though I can see that you probably wanted her that way for a cute effect, and her right hand seems, I don't know, small or something--it just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the picture. Other than that, i applaud you for her adorable expression, good anatomy, and, as I said before, awesome lighting and shading. Naruto's definitely thanking you! :D
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=Catboy-Trades May 28, 2007, 8:24:47 PM
I bet... tried going outside in just the undies with an exgirlfriend once... that resulted in basically two things... 2 people with colds.

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~CassiusOS May 28, 2007, 8:26:53 PM
The eyes here really capture me. Great job!
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~Kiey May 28, 2007, 8:28:41 PM
You've made some really good progress, especially in regards in the eyes, face, and hair.
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~Asmodeus04 May 28, 2007, 8:37:17 PM
Yeah, the entire picture is pretty much better all around, ^^. The clothes, the proportions...all are great.

On the calendar note...you ever going to finish the Bleach calendar? Or did you just kinda lose interest?

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*jadeedge May 28, 2007, 8:38:42 PM
no... i'll have it ready at the end of the year with the Naruto Bishie Calendar. i've just been up to my eyeballs in commissions and haven't had too much spare time for personal projects. ^^;

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~villamar May 28, 2007, 8:41:16 PM
Great improvement... but why she has those clothes on such a cold weather? O.o?

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~heartbubbles May 28, 2007, 8:41:18 PM
very pretty

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~harakono May 28, 2007, 8:53:24 PM
nice job, are you going to upload the lines so others can color it? that'd be awesome. nice job, there's alot of improvement there. keep it up :thumbsup:

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Mood: Neutral ~peersofart May 28, 2007, 9:03:28 PM
but she looks sexy if only i was a cartoon

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~uzzietheoceanborn May 28, 2007, 9:04:17 PM
Wow... the changes are huge... nice work

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