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Last new piece before Anime Boston. :work:
Honestly... not my fav piece, but it's done and a learned a few new techniques to use on other stuff. :p

and the BG is not a photo. i made it with Manga Studios' awesome perspective rulers and lots of Blur fliters. :X

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Given 2008-06-13

Quiet Desperation by =jadeedge is a piece that totally grabbed my attention when it was suggested! The lighting and the angle of the piece really draw you in and the eyes are very lovely and have a ton of emotion in them. The chain link fence is drawn very well and the shadows fall so very well from it. =jadeedge has really created a beautiful piece with Quiet Desperation! (Suggested by ~The-Max-Factor and Featured by `Damaged927)

Critiques


:iconromaji:
Hmmm, what to say, what to say. Well firstly, I want to say I know how the girl feels. I have felt like this many, MANY times and it is just something you never forget how you feel.

Anyways, I think this piece is very well done. I like how you did the blurred effect. It shows what should really be in focus. I think you did an amazing job with the coloring, especially her eyes. They are so hypnotizing. I spent most of the time looking at this staring into her eyes. ^^;

On another note, I do think her palm is a bit overexposed. For me, it draws my eyes away from her face and eyes, which is supposed to be the main draw point.

Your anime-style is so amazing, and is something I will definitely be checking out in the future. So keep up the great work!


Please forgive the critique if it sucks, I'm still learning to give good ones.
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:iconuchiha1412sasuke:
I've got to say, I think this piece is really well done.
I really like the blurred effect you gave to this picture; It makes the perspective look as realistic as possible.

I love the overall concept of this art piece, and I think you did a fantastic job with both coloring and shading.
I do think the highlights on her palm seemed to look a little overexposed, but I would guess that is just to add the emphasis on the light source.

Definitely one of my favorite anime-style arts on dA, it is definitely something I will remember. Great job.
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:iconnatsumetamashii:
Wow... just wow.

I would give critique, but I can't think of any. :+fav:

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:iconvelvetmaiden:
Absolutely beautiful. The expression you were aiming for was hit right on the nail.

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:iconmiyokodosei:
love it lots! Um... I don't really have anything to pick at about it... I don't like to offer critique to people who are way more talented than I XD keep up the good work! It's an awesome piece!
:iconfaerie-princess-ami:
This just looks amazing, and sad :(

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:iconyoungonex:
nice pic, it might just be me but i think the pinky is a little too fat? or is that the ring finger?

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:iconelflienne:
This is so clean and the colors are so nice. And the perspective is awesome! I love everything about it!
:iconmegakc:
You really brought out the theme of "desperation" in this picture. You can even see it in her eyes. Job well done!

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:iconrogue7:
And i though the sketch was good, Wow
:iconalexwind:
hugs..very nice..its so sad

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:iconvashperado:
mega props for attempting a chain-link fence! i never want to do that~ haha
or if i did it would just be
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