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CommentsNice but I have a very good suggestion for you. Lose the Top!!!
-- Welcome-to-the-wonderful-house-of-Tedd-Tedd's-house-is-your-house-please-feel-free-to-stay-as-long-as-you-like- -and-let-it-be-known-if-you're-having-nightmares-it's-OK-for-you-to-sleep-in-my-bed-welcome! Tedd from [link] I think it looks good - especially the tonal range in the skin areas, but the white.... 'thing' around her forearms is a little distracting. You've put a lot of work into the range across the flesh, it's a shame that spoils it.
Assuming it's a towel of some kind, even if it was white it would not reflect as much light as her eyes or the wet areas of her body. Some texturing and blending into some darker tones might help there. I still thing it looks great though (minor distraction ignored). -- Ooo, looky! Three links of juicy goodness: personally....i dont like how that boa thingy looks.....just..needs some shading...but good job
-- And our eyes must do some raining if were ever gonna grow... people shouldnt be afraid of their government, governments should be afraid of their people. writers use lies to tell the truth...politicians use them to cover up the truth well....true.....hahaha....yes.....the boa thingy is all that really needs work
thats what i do think anyway -- And our eyes must do some raining if were ever gonna grow... people shouldnt be afraid of their government, governments should be afraid of their people. writers use lies to tell the truth...politicians use them to cover up the truth |
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