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Nemu ver3 -SKETCH- by *jadeedge:iconjadeedge:


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Submitted: November 19, 2007
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did this a couple days ago... but the internet's been kinda wonky lately... :p
i think i'm gonna stuck with this one. i kept the ribbons/wrap theme from the first sketch.

critiques? :heart:
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Can't really see any problems, nice job dude
Totally awesome ! instant fav ( no critiques :D)

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*Watching probably Gintama, while brains are left to a rack ^^*
nice idea actually. the waist could be just a tid bit sexier. i it like though.

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that should be like it ok:)

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I really like it, the outfit and posture bring out her submissiveness. I hope it's going into the calendar, I plan on buying one! (Mostly looking forward to Yoruichi, hope she's February, my month).

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It's sexy but a bit haunting, but her character is anyway. I really can't see anything wrong with it, so its the best critique I can come up with, sorry ^^;
You might try pulling her knees in a little. Her face is shy so why not try and show a little tenseness by not not opening her legs so far. besides that looks solid.
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Uhhh!! Very Nice!! :D

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i like Nemu. Thats why i realy got mad when that bastard hurt her . Btw : Nice pic. Will you make colored version too?
Day-um.

It seems to me that she could be a bit thinner at the torso, but otherwise, very cool.

Look forward to the final version! =)

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