did this a couple days ago... but the internet's been kinda wonky lately...
i think i'm gonna stuck with this one. i kept the ribbons/wrap theme from the first sketch.
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I really like it, the outfit and posture bring out her submissiveness. I hope it's going into the calendar, I plan on buying one! (Mostly looking forward to Yoruichi, hope she's February, my month).
It's sexy but a bit haunting, but her character is anyway. I really can't see anything wrong with it, so its the best critique I can come up with, sorry
You might try pulling her knees in a little. Her face is shy so why not try and show a little tenseness by not not opening her legs so far. besides that looks solid.
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It seems to me that she could be a bit thinner at the torso, but otherwise, very cool.
Look forward to the final version!
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