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A Collection of seasonal art of all mediums and genres, and from artists of all ages and talents from well seasoned experts to beginners.
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it seems like it's "missing" something...
 any help would be hot. i'm kinda burnt at the moment...  Comments bondage!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
-- ★天を鎖す太陽。。。夜を削る月★  Perhaps adding in her other hand would help; at the moment it feels like its hidden for some reason. Also you may consider curling the wrap back inwards to pull your view back into the frame. At the moment it feels a little distracting. Other than that the expression on the face is nice and your pose is dead on sexy. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll get what you want out of it.
-- ~I'm not crazy... I'm going sane in a crazy world~  >_> i got a huge fettish for her after seeing this piccy now.
Good work XD  gotta admit, I don't know much about the character... but how much would it change the tone of the picture if she was looking directly at the viewer? *shrugs* Something to consider.
-- Uchiha Anonymous: Whether you like sunken-eyed psychos or angsty bastards, we've got you covered!  Hm...maybe some lose hair would be nice, and the fabric scarf coming off to the right is pretty distracting. If that was just loose and dangly it be pretty cool, for scarf and hair :3
-- [--They're sharing a drink they call lonliness, but its better then drinkin' alone--]  (spraying nosebleed, until passes out on keyboard)
fjwjluffjkwegjkl -- CRAWLING IN MY SKIN!!! THE ORANGES WILL NOT PEEL!!!  maybe more detail to the body and maybe a sad expression?
Something totally off topic, if you rearrange the letters of her name you would get "Menu"  the material going to the right and out of the screen seems disturbing in a way. it's like she's gotten herself tangled but she's oblivious to it, having no expression on her face that indicates her awareness of being stuck.
and yes, that melancholic look on her face is missing. but other than that, as usual, wow. -- いつかはきっと近付きたい あの雲の高さ 必ずたどりつけるはず  curvage is missing for me, as well as loose hair--like even if you just relax the sideburns a bit...and instead of covering her crotch area like that, try an angled approach...kinda like a half diaper or something so it looks like underwear and not a micro mini skirt
-- <3 Nothing takes the taste out of peanut butter quite like unrequited love. |
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