~whistles~ ...Wow. That's the first thing that went through my mind when I saw this. Truly...a wonderful piece, hands down. Make sure to color it well! ~teasing~ ^^

Anyways, you asked for nice, good ol' constructive criticism. So here we go:

+The hand in the pocket. Specifically, the thumb. The way you've hooked it (as if the thumb was bent) looks awkward, and in my opinion, should actually be more or less straight - generally, when people put their hands in their pockets, they keep their thumb straight when doing so. Figured if you wanted a more realistic look, you'd want to notice that.

+Down the pocket side of the jacket-thing. The stripes aren't parallel. Even with perspective tilting the lines (because of the wrinkles, the lines will tilt, etc. etc.; yeah, I knew that), they would still appear more or less parallel - only, with the wrinkles added in, it would make the lines do this:
| |
\ \

instead of this:

| |
\ /

Get what I'm saying?

+For some reason...I just can't put my finger on it, but I can't stop thinking that the person's left leg doesn't have enough wrinkles. That blotch of white space is kinda distracting, when you compare it to all the incredibly nice detailed wrinkles you've put everywhere else. Strange, eh?

Those are pretty much the only major-ish things I could make a serious note of. Obviously, it's still a little bit sketchy with the soft lines and stuff, but I assume that they were kept that way for the coloring process, so...word, yo.

Hope my ideas kinda helped you out a bit. If they didn't...then...ignore me. ^^

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nope! helps a lot! thanx bunches!!

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this is very nice, is that tablet art or pencil work. very nice. hes just chilling... waiting for his girl to come down those stairs.

tablet. i'd die with out my 12x12 Wacom baby!!!

hmm... yeah, he kinda does look like he's waitin for somebody... i like that!

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Very nice lol i like the chilling look

*steals it and colors it all wrong*

dude are you a DDR fan as well? we should go DDR at hilltop! im a lightfoot thou so im not really worthy.

yeah, i play at Hilltop. but i HATE that fat guy that works there!! he pisses me off like no other!!!
but yeah i'll play DDR witchoo! i'll show yah the ropes! well... i guess it'd be arrows... hee hee

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i have been blessed with not seeing the fat guy. but yeah, teaching me would be the awsome!

hehe! i love your work, dragonzair here from the forums! not sure if i added you yet....*tries to remember*.....maybe not...i'll watch ya now!

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