I sense a disturbed greatness in the force....



Looks awesome...

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The perspective is awesome. It's kinda giving me a headache, but you should keep it. All the lines look solid, it'll just be brushing up details [especially word art on those signs] that'll perfect it.

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i have a bad habit of only using on brush size when i sketch. and when i do lines they come out really strong. >_<
also, it's been a while since i've done a single vanishing-point style perspective. it's easy, but can be visually fake or confusing. i hope i can fix it

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Oh my god, the lines! It may just be the thickness of the lines, but somehow I feel like you're trying to cram a bit too much into this. It seems the focal point is crowded. I realize it could change when you start coloring it and all, and that it'll look better, I'm just saying what I see right now.

Okay, on the pillars, the fourth one back, it's a little far near the center. And then the one after that is touching the line and that seems a bit awkward to me, like the place was built somewhat unevenly. I guess you could use a faint guide line to the focal point to help get the bottoms of the pillars lined up. I don't know how important that is, though.

Kudos on doing something like this. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product.

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The girl's stomach area looks a little off and the lines do make it a little busy, but all in all it's a great picture.

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i really like your perspective. i know it's just a sketch, but the lines you used to draw her are alot thinner than the ones you used for the bg, and it looks slightly off.

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It does....
Just not for the subway though.

Aw man, I think I should draw the city more often.
Don't have the time for it anymore.

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Great picture. I really like the lines

Side note: you can get to Midway from Clark/Lake via the orange line So its accurate as well as symbolic [link]

wow great lineart

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