This looks awesome owo *praises and bows to its awesomeness*

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Very nice! The colours are soft and calming, and the details are nice, too.

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adv. critique huh....

hmm

pro:
+ composition is good
+ the feel is there, lovely environment

con:
- i guess you can show a little bit of her neck
- try connecting the nose bridge with the eyebrow. but it looks ok actually
- colouring the lineart might work.

great job totally actually, another great work!

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fuk yea
this looks great man! i love it
anything to critique, perhaps she was shaded too smoothly
it almost gives a blurry appearance as opposed to a solid woman in front of you
but seriosuly way cool work dude!

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Very very good use of lighting, especially on the glass, it gives it a very nice realistic, smooth texture. The expression on the woman is also very appropriate to the title. The only thing I can really see you change possibly is the color palette used. There aren't too many contrasting colors except for the face with the red, which is one of the things I pick up first. The use of contrasting colors will help things pop, define shapes, and where to lead the eye next. But, since bright whites are used all throughout it helps to lead the around. I would add some cooler colors possibly. But, besides that... this is a great piece the coloring is nice and so is the lighting/shading keep up the good work

awesome!!!!!!!!!!

Omg Wow!!
This is insanly awsome!! ^_^

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pros :: almost everything.....awesome work!
cons:: i dunno how i and i repeat I feel about the collar bone, but i guess that if you saw the bone and sync it with the neck position that's how it would turn out, right??

anyway, that's my opinion... im not nearly as good as some people here, and i am also.... um not really good at anatomy, so...

thanks for the awesome pic and i hope you are happy since you moved!!

The collar bones seem to end a bit too close to the shoulders, but that may just be me. I love the shading you did (it was hard to concentrate, as I am a huge fan of boobies), but she seems too brightly lit and shiny, compared to the background. You can probably get rid of the armpit line on her right (our left) shoulder.

Very lovely, though. Infinitely more talented than I.