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CommentsNot to be a nit pick...but the girl on the right has manly hips. It goes from large torso to tiny hips...which I think you were trying to do perspective, but its not working as intended. However, if you enlarge the hips, the thighs will need to be motified as well. I love all your other work, so this isn't an attack, just an observation. The girl on the right is perfect....her gesture and her expression.
-- visit: [link]! very wicked mate!!!
the only problem i can see is the second girl, yeah her hips look a little off. but thats just a prospective thing.... and truth be told i wouldn't of realized it if it wasn't pointed out by shadedwillow, so it not that big of a mistake... awesome job never the less mate keep it up!!! There's something about the face of the first girl that I just don't like...although the second one's OK: gotta hand it to ya.
Except for that first girl, everything came out OK. -- "Whenever I comment, I will try to go besides the usual "awesome work". Might be a joke, might be constructive criticism. I don't know, really. But I will always try to help you one way or another: no doubt about that." ~daftart I dunno, it seems like there were a lot of anatomy errors resulting from this either being rushed or lazy, like in the arms, breasts, faces and hips. But you're right, the towel is damn fine. XD
Which parts of the background did you draw? Cos the ocean looks fantastic, but the island looks like a photo and so stands out a little too much. -- "I'm a big supporter of feminism as long as it involves cute girls and weapons." -Pan!ies T: "For once, I have women trying to follow me around." J: "Yeah, but they're trying to kill you." T: "Still, it's a plus." |
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